
The Visited (1959) by Joan O’Donovan is yet another book that I’ve read because of a post by Brad. Well, if he starts a post by talking about ‘misfit spinsters’, you know I’m going to get hold of it, don’t you? Of the various novels he covers in the article, this one appealed the most – the ill-fated attempts of an ageing spinster to find a husband and, thereby, escape her domineering mother. When my copy arrived, it had puff quotes by writers as various as J.B. Priestley, Penelope Mortimer and Elizabeth Jenkins on the back. Here’s how it opens:
In spite of the revival of Irish, the new hotel was called the Magnifique, perhaps because there was no word in that ancient language to do it justice. One’s first impression was of hysteria. It was full of pink light and chromium, and so imposing that it destroyed entirely the proportions of the Georgian square.
This is the background for a holiday that Englishwoman Edith Crannick is taking in Dublin. Her first mention is a one-sentence paragraph: ‘Edith Crannick was as miserable as hell.’ She was, we quickly learn, ‘bored and lonely’. Brad’s review describes her as being in her mid-thirties, though an early paragraph says: ‘At intervals, Edith reminded herself that she was fifty-three and old enough to know better.’ I’m going to come onto ages later, because they confused me a bit.
Bored and lonely as she is, Edith is not initially particularly excited to meet Leopold Darkin. He is also English but a rung or two below her on the social scale, or at least he seems satisfied with his social standing where she aspires to better. Having instantly dismissed her as unattractive and not worth bothering about, he finds that beggars can’t be choosers and approaches her out of sheer boredom. It is not an auspicious start:
He looked round for Edith, and when Edith saw him coming towards her she bristled. She had noticed him, and she didn’t like the look of him. She disliked the way he stuck out his elbows and rubbed his hands. She disliked the way he hovered and smiled, and, even more, the way he frowned and looked important. He shouted at waiters and he looked at women’s legs. In fact, he was a little pip-squeak and she saw no reason why she should talk to him.
It isn’t very promising, is it? Well, that was on page seven. By page ten, she is giggling at his jokes and somehow they have charmed each other. The relationship is cemented by him resucing her from drowning in the sea – O’Donovan leaves it just about unclear whether it was a suicide attempt on Edith’s part – and they are devoted to each other from then on. As luck would have it, they even live a few streets apart from one another back in England. There are subtle elements to The Visited, but the sudden gear shift from distaste to love is not among them. As with quite a lot of the novel, I felt myself wishing that O’Donovan had been a bit wiser with her talents. She is in many ways an excellent writer – but she hangs this writing on a plot that is pretty structurally unsound in places.
But the real meat of the novel is back in England. Leopold lives with his daughter Caroline – not quite young enough to be adorable, but not old enough to be too much of a problem either. His wife, he explains, has run off and abandoned him. The divorce hasn’t come through, but it’s a matter of time and the sort of awkward arrangements that were necessary to provide ‘evidence’ for a divorce in the mid-century. Edith is content to wait… for now.
Back at home, Edith’s mother is indeed domineering, but not in the sense of shouting or putting her foot down. Rather, she plays up her vulnerabilities and helplessness. Some of it is clearly real, and some is very much affected. Whatever the occasional flimsiness of her plot, O’Donovan is very good on character, and particularly the ways that people manipulate one another. The reader becomes as infuriated as Edith with Mrs Crannick, who is quietly determined to keep Edith at hand and never finishes a sentence or thought.
Mrs Crannick addressed herself to Leopold:
“When you get to my age, you know, you don’t really sleep. I haven’t slept for… But I can’t complain. Are these for me? How very… No, I can’t complain; I’ve had more than my three score years and… I’ll be eighty-six next birthday, Mr…?”
“This is Mr Darkin, Mother.” Edither whispered to Leopold, “Hold the fort, darling; I shan’t be a minute.”
She wetn out to the kitchen, shutting the door after her.
“I don’t recall the name. Have we met? I’m afraid Ede gets very cross with me. I forget, and… I’m stupid, you know. It must be very irritating. Such an intelligent… a real career girl. I’m afraid I get on her nerves…”
You understand the type, I am sure. And it brings me onto ages. If Mrs Crannick is 85, then it makes sense for Edith to be 53. A little while later, Caroline thinks: ‘She liked to know people’s ages. You got some surprises. For instance, Daddie was only twenty-seven, even though he was going bald.’ Firstly, I was more or less bald at 27, Caroline, so lower your voice. But secondly – is this true? Is this a joke on O’Donovan’s part, that Leopold has lied to his daughter about his age? Or is this really a novel about the love between a 27-year-old man and a 53-year-old woman, because that would be a much more unusual and radical approach. I’m leaning towards it being a joke, because surely otherwise the age gap would have been a central plot point?
Gradually – but not that gradually – The Visited becomes a different sort of novel. This is not about unlikely lovers battling the expectations of her mother and the jealousies of his wife. It is a much sadder, in ways more predictable, plot: a woman being lied to by a man. Edith knows that marriage to Leopold is her final hope for stability and independence from her mother. Leopold knows… that he has not told Edith the whole truth, and it is increasingly unlikely that she will find that out.
Again, O’Donovan is very good at the manipulation between characters, and there are sharp moments of disillusion. I loved this line: ‘She looked at him curiously. She had almost forgotten that, at their first meeting, he had reminded her of her mother.’
Ultimately, O’Donovan doesn’t seem to know how to maintain subtlety. The plot of the novel descends into moments that would fit better in a schlocky Gothic horror than in a thoughtful novel about hope and deceit. I gradually realised why it appeared in a cover as garish as this one. Some of the expectations of genre created by the cover seep into the plot.
This was O’Donovan’s first novel, and it feels to me like the output of an excellent writer who hadn’t yet worked out how to control her work. Now, of course, those three illustrious authors quoted on the back disagreed with me. And you may find the meeting of genres – the instant-falling-in-love combined with more melancholy, philosophical takes on ageing – is more to your taste. I really enjoyed reading The Visited, but felt continually haunted by the rather better book that was hiding somewhere within this one.




